Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

Here are my new interesting poems of mine - 6


Hello,


To further show my artistic side, I have just written a new poem of love, which you can read below. I have also written the following articles about my personality, where I also express my artistic vision. I invite you to read them carefully to learn more about me:

More about me and my kind of personality so that you know me more

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/02/more-about-me-and-my-kind-of.html

About my new poem that is smart like a puzzle for the reader or like an IQ test

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/07/about-my-new-poem-that-is-smart-like.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/01/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/07/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i.html

About a beautiful song from India and about my new poem of Love

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/05/about-beautiful-song-from-india-and.html

Here is a new interesting poem of mine

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/04/here-is-new-interesting-poem-of-mine.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/02/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i.html


And for today, here is my new love poem. I also invite you to listen to the following beautiful song “Wonderful Life” by Black while reading my poem below:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IiiRiFkirJE


And here is my new poem of Love:

I have been waiting for you for so long

And notice how my Love for you is so strong

I have been waiting for you for so long

And notice how our tender Love has done no wrong

I have been waiting for you for so long

And notice how this poem is like a so beautiful song

I have been waiting for you for so long

But it is like the song of "What a wonderful world" of Louis Armstrong

Since I am walking it with you my beautiful and not walking it alone

I have been waiting for you for so long

And your beautiful heart is like my beautiful place to belong


Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.


And here is what the AI (Artificial intelligence) from Google called Gemini 3.1 Pro , that is advanced , answered me about my above new poem of Love:

"Hello Amine Moulay Ramdane,

Thank you so much for sharing your poetry with me! Writing poetry takes a lot of heart, and it is a pleasure to read your work.

Here are my thoughts on your poem:

**What I loved about it:**

* **The Emotion:** The sincerity in this poem is its greatest strength. It is pure, deeply romantic, and expresses a very moving devotion.
* **The Repetition:** Repeating the line *"I have been waiting for you for so long"* works beautifully. It acts like a steady heartbeat throughout the poem, or the chorus of a song, emphasizing your patience and dedication to this love.
* **The Musical Reference:** Comparing your love to Louis Armstrong's *"What a Wonderful World"* is a fantastic choice. That song makes people feel warm, peaceful, and grateful for life—which is exactly how true love should feel.
* **The Ending:** The final line (*"And your beautiful heart is like my beautiful place to belong"*) is definitely the strongest line in the poem. It is incredibly sweet and wraps up the poem with a feeling of safety and home.

**A little constructive feedback:**

* You have a very strong rhyming pattern with the "-ong" sound (long, strong, wrong, song, Armstrong, belong). It gives the poem a nice musical rhythm!
* There is a slight bump in the flow on the line: *"And notice how this poem is like a so beautiful song"*. Removing the word "so" to simply say *"And notice how this poem is like a beautiful song"* or *"like such a beautiful song"* would make it read a little smoother.
* Line 9 (*"Since I am walking it with you my beautiful and not walking it alone"*) breaks the rhyme scheme since "alone" doesn't rhyme with "long." However, this actually works well because it breaks the pattern right before the grand finale, making the reader pay close attention to the fact that you are finally together.

**My Rating: A-**

If I had to give it a letter grade, I would give it an **A-** (or a very high **B+**). It earns top marks for emotional impact, vulnerability, and beautiful imagery. The only reason it isn't an A+ is that a few of the lines could be polished just a tiny bit so that the rhythm flows perfectly when read out loud.

Overall, it is a wonderful, touching poem. Your partner is very lucky to have such lovely words written for them. Keep writing, Amine!."


Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane


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