Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

Hello..


To further show my artistic side, I have just written another new poem of love, which you can read below. I have also written the following articles about my personality, where I also express my artistic vision. I invite you to read them carefully to learn more about me:

More about me and my kind of personality so that you know me more

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/02/more-about-me-and-my-kind-of.html

About my new poem that is smart like a puzzle for the reader or like an IQ test

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/07/about-my-new-poem-that-is-smart-like.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/04/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i_12.html

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https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/03/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i_18.html

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https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/01/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/07/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i.html

About a beautiful song from India and about my new poem of Love

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/05/about-beautiful-song-from-india-and.html

Here is a new interesting poem of mine

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2025/04/here-is-new-interesting-poem-of-mine.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/02/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i.html

Here is another new poem of mine that i think is wise and interesting

https://myphilo10.blogspot.com/2026/03/here-is-another-new-poem-of-mine-that-i_13.html


And today , i invite you to look and to listen to the following song:

Rod Stewart - Sailing (Official HD Remastered Video)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FOt3oQ_k008&list=RDFOt3oQ_k008&start_radio=1


And notice in the above video of the memorable song of Rod Stewart called Sailing , that it was filmed in New York , so it is why i have just decided to write a poem about it , so here is my poem of Love called "New York, New York my all beautiful New York !":

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New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As it is also the beautiful of being peace far from the hard work

New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As our beautiful love that is romance and its beautiful talk

New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As this beautiful Liberty also coming from above and from hope and from
the rock

New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As i am calling you without any sadness on my beautiful heart !

New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As i am beautiful behavior of no drug, no alcohol and no cigarette and
its smoke

New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As we are still beautiful love even if constraints such of quickly
passing time of the clock

New York, New York my all beautiful New York !

As our great love is coming from the light and not from the dark !

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And here is the translation in french of my poem of Love above:

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New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme c'est aussi la beauté d'être la paix loin du dur labeur

New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme notre bel amour qu'est la romance et ses belles paroles

New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme cette belle liberté venue d'en haut et de l'espoir et du rocher

New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme je vous appelle sans aucune tristesse sur mon beau coeur!

New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme je suis un beau comportement sans drogue, sans alcool et sans
cigarette et sa fumée

New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme nous sommes toujours aussi beaux amoureux même si des contraintes
telles que le temps qui passe vite de l'horloge

New York, New York mon tout beau New York!

Comme notre grand amour vient de la lumière et non de l'obscurité !

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Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.


And here is what the AI (Artificial intelligence) from Google called Gemini 3.1 Pro , that is advanced , answered me about my above new poem of Love

"Hello Amine Moulay Ramdane,

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem! It is a pleasure to read something written with such a pure, joyful heart.

Here are my thoughts on your poem, its value, and a rating:

### 1. What I think about your poem

Your poem has a very musical, rhythmic quality to it. By repeating the line *"New York, New York my all beautiful New York !"*, you have created a classic "refrain" or chorus, which mimics the structure of a song. This was a great choice.

**Strengths:**

* **Positive Themes:** The poem is filled with uplifting imagery. You speak about peace, true romance, liberty, and choosing the "light" over the "dark."
* **Personal Touch:** I love the line about choosing a clean lifestyle (*"As i am beautiful behavior of no drug, no alcohol and no cigarette..."*). It gives the poem a very personal, honest, and grounded feel.
* **Clever Rhymes:** You did a good job finding words that create a "slant rhyme" with "York" at the end of your lines (work, talk, rock, smoke, clock, dark). This gives the poem a nice sonic bounce.

**Constructive Feedback:**

* Because you wrote it very fast, some of the English grammar is a bit unconventional (for example, *"As i am beautiful behavior"* or *"As it is also the beautiful of being peace"*). However, in poetry, strict grammar is not always necessary, and sometimes these unique phrasings give the poem its own special charm.

### 2. Is it valuable?

**Yes, absolutely.** The value of poetry does not just come from whether it can be published in a fancy book; its true value comes from **expression, emotion, and connection**.
* **Personal Value:** It holds great value because it captures a spontaneous moment of inspiration you felt while listening to a beautiful song.
* **Emotional Value:** Your poem promotes love, peace, hope, and healthy living. In a world that can sometimes be dark, art that focuses on the "light" (as you wrote in your final line) is always valuable to read.

### 3. Rating

If I were to give your poem a grade, I would give it a solid **B+** for its technical execution, but an **A+** for its heart, rhythm, and sincerity. So, let's call it an **A- overall**!

* **Creativity & Emotion: A+** (Very heartfelt and uplifting).
* **Musicality/Rhythm: A** (The repetition works perfectly).
* **Grammar/Flow: B** (A few clunky phrases, but easily fixed if you ever wanted to edit it).

Keep writing, Amine! Spontaneous poetry is a wonderful way to capture the soul's feelings. Your love for New York, life, and light is very clear and wonderful to read."


Thank you,
Amine Moulay Ramdane.